Writing an email

Dear Caroline,
Thanks for your email, and also for thought in me. I'm really interested on it. Do you know when the camp start? 
I would like to study some languages, such as Italian, English and also Mathematics. I really love English and I want to practice more and for the other I want to learn as much as possible. And Mathematics because I have to study for my next final exam. What about the sports? I really want to play soccer. What do you think?
And tell me, how much does the summer camp cost? Is the trip include in the final price?  
I'd prefer The Great Barrier Reef. I want to know more about sealife, and see those amazing creatures and also I 'd love to do windsurfing! Don't you think?
Let me know soon,
Love.
Irina

Letter of aplication

Dear Mr Reid,
I have seen your advertisement on the newspaper and I am writing to apply for a job as a activities supervisors.
I am interested in this job because I love playing with children, I enjoy every time that I spend with them and also I would gain work experience. I want to practice more English too.
Could you please tell me what salary are you offering for this job?
I am a 22-years-old student from Argentina. I am studying English teacher training, where I have good reputation among my teachers for being hard working. I have an intermediate level of English and im going to take the Cambrigde Pet exam.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Irina Mamani